Critique - Speaking from Experience

This was a really useful Crit we had to present infront of a small group with 3 design direction boards:

These are my Design Direction Boards:

This is my Feedback:

• Find a way to interact with the audience
• Talk about finding the right job.
• How am I going to bind it?
• Am I going to package?
• Can I create stamps?
• Newspaper stock seems relevant.
• If formal make sure students will want to read it.
• Consider addressing, how to manage the negatives?
• Ensure all side products are relevant.
• Can you use LCA logo as letter head?
• Test different stocks as colours may not work
• Look at both sides of having & not having a job?
• Maybe use prices of things to help persuade?
• Maybe compare compare two students one with a job & one without?
• Having a job & studying benefits
• Good primary research!
• Interview Tips
• Informative - will it be motivational to get a job?
• CV Different templates?
• Minimal text turn into posters?
• Focussing on managing time would work
• Is there many people on this course with jobs as a lot of work load?
• Is a job necessary?

The bold ones are the ones I am going to take on board and try and think about them in more detail when starting to design the zine & information box.